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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I figure some feedback for some feedback, right? owo Afterall, you did post a comment on my picture. >w<
And since you want feedback on how you can improve, I'll do my best to find some suggestions~<3
And mind you, if it feels like I'm just picking at the negative, pleaaaase don't be offended. D: Cause I promise I do really like this piece as a whole. ;w; It's got a great composition, choice of color, and the poses are dynamic, and yet somehow static.
The first thing I'd say, is watch the length of the middle finger right below the girl in the white dress' head. It seems to be twice the length of the index finger. Although I can see that you attempted to curl it in a very visually appealing manner; in a pose that's normally GREAT to look at it. The way I'd say to fix it, is you can easily move the top of the middle finger, and the top of the ring finger down about a MM, and have the bottom part of the middle finger come in more, and not show a space between it and the index.
The second thing is that there's a random, stray line underneath the girl in the red dress' arm. This is a tiny thing, but it's making me wonder if there was something planned for that, like a part of the dress that didn't get finished. :3
And finally, since it looks like the girl in the white dress is leaning sort of away from the viewer, and the girl in the red dress is leaning towards the viewer to touch the first girl, maybe angle the second girl's torso a bit more. I'd imagine if you move her lower half a little bit upwards, and show her torso angled so you can see a tiny bit of where her waistline goes into her hip, it'd be a much more dramatic perspective. owo
Ok, I really, really hope none of that sounded mean. x.x; I'm never good at giving critiques, but I do hope you found it helpful hun. ;w;
Thank you so much for taking the time to comment on my artwork (^-^)
Its all part of growing as an artist dear
chaiyok~ i know you can improve!